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Reflection on the class - I thought getting us to guess what other people's brands were from the first was a really good idea, it made sure everyone's brands fit the problem they were trying to solve.
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What I have for the critique was this presentation filled with the things that were asked for. Here is the link to me explaining areas of it. Presentation - Mid-semester critique
https://embed.figma.com/slides/A1y0H4myw0f5r2qOGy80Fq/Warden_Erin_uxd303?node-id=1-1031&t=ZzdNMKQ1ygFHZPjY-1&embed-host=notion&footer=false&theme=system
Feedback
- Fun colours that represent the brand well
- Add font size to brand page
- Could make the persona into just one
- Concerns over the green not being a clear highlight colour because of its tone.
- The wait-for-them option is made clearer with an online.
- Has a dating app feel with a buddy system and interest
- Could add story titles to make them clear as stories
- Could add an I’m in this area feature and get people to meet through that
- Could add an events section for societies
- Unsure about the social media side and its use case.


Changes
- I will work on the green to make it clearer and show when something is selected
- I will add the font sizes to the brand page
- I will use one of my personas as the main one and the master's student one as an extra