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This is what I produced for the critique, I thought it was really interesting to see what others produced for their dashboards and the very different directions that everyone took some highlights were people illustrations that they used to represent what they did in that week, someone that stood out to me was the other Erin, Erin Patten with the amount of balloons she had blown up that week it was really nice the way it was represented. My feedback was that he liked the style and design of my dashboard but the location on the key could be moved to be across a banner at the top and make each subject clickable to a bigger version as it's not as readable as it currently is. This was really helpful feedback especially to look at moving the key and other elements as I do think it will fit a lot better. I did sketches to show how I will reorganise everything.